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On Screen p 107. Report about your classes at the EOI. Writing

 

Write a report

Task description 


Your company paid for your enrolment at the EOI this year. After a couple of months at the EOI they want to know if their money was well invested and if more needs to be done. Therefore, you have been asked to write a report about your classes, your achievements, your goals, your experience in general, your needs and any recommendations you have for the continued success of the programme.
These are some of the points you need to include in the report:
- Evaluate the effectiveness of the education programme
- Reflect and recognise what you are learning
- What progress you have made toward learning goals
- Key learning objectives you have accomplished
- Key learning objectives you would like to accomplish
- What you should do to improve
- What you need to do to perform successfully
- What else you need from the programme

 

Models:

On Screen p 107. Report: William Shakespeare Course. Cloze

On Screen p 107. Raising Funds For Our Local Animal Shelter. Report. Word Formation

 

 

 

On Screen p 107. Raising Funds For Our Local Animal Shelter. Report. Word Formation

 

Task description

Over the last year your school has been raising money in support of a local charity. You have been asked to write a report for staff and students on the past year of fundraising activities for the charity.

In your report you should briefly describe the chosen charity and its aims, evaluate the overall success of the fundraising and explain which activities were the most successful.

Raising Funds For Our Local Animal Shelter.

Introduction

For the last year our college has been running its own charity events to raise funds for our local animal shelter. This report will remind students and staff about the aims of the charity chosen, and explain how successful the (1)______________ (PIONEER) initiative has been so far.

The charity

The charity chosen by the college is the local animal shelter. Its aims are not only to give abandoned pets the best possible care at the shelter, but also to find every pet a new home. They use donations for (2)_____________ (SUPPLY) and to employ staff to check that adopted pets are treated well and are happy.

Overall success

On the whole, the school's (3)______________ (FUND) efforts have been (4)___________ (EXTREME) successful. We raised $5000 in 12 months, which the charity told us represents 20% of their (5)_____________ (OVER) donations this year. They were (6)____________ (ELATION) and have sent us many pictures of (7)___________ (JOY) pets that have been adopted thanks to our hard work.

Most successful activities

Coffee mornings and the sports events were the activities which helped raise the majority of the (8)____________ (SUBSTANCE) amount mentioned above. In particular, the 'man's best friend' 5km race, where students, teachers and many (9)____________ (WILL) members of the public participated with their dogs, succeeded in promoting the shelter. (10)______________ (INTEREST), we are told that several adoptions took place the following week.

Conclusion

As can be seen in this report, the (11)______________ (CHARITY) events organised by the schools have been (12)____________ (REMARKABLE) successful on the whole. Moreover, the charity chosen is (13)______________ (IMMENSE) pleased to have the school's (14)_____________ (VALUE) help and we are not at all (15)_____________ (SATISFACTION) with how the funds raised are being used. 


KEY


1. pioneering

 

 

 

2. supplies

supplies: (pl) provisions: food, equipment. The things such as food, medicines, fuel, etc. that are needed by a group of people, for example an army or expedition. Sp. suministro. E.g. Our backpacks held all of our supplies for the 7-day hike. Sp. Nuestras mochilas contenían todos nuestros suministros para la excursión de siete días. 



3. fundraising

 

 

 

4. extremely

 

 

5. overall

overall: considering or including everything. Total. 

E.g.

The overall cost of the exhibition was £400,000.  

The overall result is an increase in population.  

An overall winner and a runner-up were chosen.  

We don’t want all the details now, just the overall picture.



6. elated

elated: extremely happy and excited, especially because of something that has happened or is going to happen. OPP depressed. 

E.g.  

He felt elated.

elated at/by  She was elated at the prospect of a holiday. 



7. joyful

 

 

 

8. substantial

 

 

 

9. willing 




10. Interestingly,




11. charitable

 

 

 

12. remarkably

 

 

 

13. immensely 



14.invaluable/ valuable




15. dissatisfied / unsatisfied

On Screen p 107. Report: William Shakespeare Course. Cloze

 Introduction

The (0) aim of this report is to describe and evaluate the four-week William Shakespeare course that I (1)___________ at the community college in April, as well as assess (2)___________ usefulness and give some recommendations.

Content

The course approached the works of Shakespeare in a way (3)__________ I found to be quite novel and thoroughly engaging. As a class, we did not look at a play in its entirety, but parts of different works (4)___________ connected themes such as love, ambition and conscience. This enabled us to trace the development of Shakespeare's views. In addition, the tutor drew wonderful parallels between Shakespeare and present-day situations. This brought Shakespeare to (5)______________ and made the works very accessible.

Organisation

The classes were very well-organised. The course objectives were clearly explained at the start and the class discussion was directed towards (6)_____________ achievements. Due to this, we were able to cover all of the material. Our tutor was also very firm in steering us along the way- while encouraging plenty of discussion, she ensured we never strayed far from the topic (7)____________ hand. Clearly, the tutor is a very experienced and competent teacher.

Atmosphere

The course was conducted in a friendly and supportive atmosphere. There was encouragement from the tutor, as well as a good rapport (8)___________ class members. The relaxed nature of this course put everyone (9)___________ ease and this promoted a risk-free atmosphere in which participants could express their views without fear or hesitation.

Conclusion

In conclusion, I believe anyone attending this course would find it stimulating. It is particularly useful to students of English literature who will gain new insight into Shakespeare, but equally of value to anyone who enjoys a lively discussion. In the (10)_____________ of this, I would suggest each session be slightly longer in order to accommodate further discussion.



KEY

1. attended

 

 

 

2. its 

 

 

 

3. which

 

 

 

4. through

 

 

 

5. life

 

 

6. their

 

 

 

7.  at/in

at hand

needing to be dealt with now. Happening or present at this time. Sp. que nos ocupa. E.g.The space shuttle crew must stay completely focused on the task at hand.    Peter turned his attention to the task at hand.

in hand:

the job, question, etc. in hand is the one that you are dealing with.

E.g.
Please confine your comments to the topic in hand. 

task in hand Sp. tarea en cuestión  

matter in hand Sp. asunto en cuestión

 




8. between

 

 

 

9. at 

 

 

 

10. light

in the light of sth/ in light of sth

in view of, after considering something. because of. E.g. In light of recent incidents, we are asking our customers to take particular care of their personal belongings. He rewrote the book in the light of further research. In light of recent developments, we're postponing our meeting. In the light of the weather forecast we've cancelled the picnic,